They look good! I like the little icing footprints.
The art is lovely! But I'm not crazy about the text. It isn't so much that it's black, but the placement is a bit haphazard in certain spots. 1.) The second, third and last panel where it covers the baker's hat.2.) In the second panel it seems crammed between the chalk board and the right edge of the page.3.) The 4th panel where it covers the baker's rack.4.) The 5th panel where it covers the pies.I have a few suggestions, but they require the assitance of illustrator and/or photoshop. We could discuss it Thursday if you'd like.