Sunday, October 17, 2010

I think she's done. [Progress 1-12]

Let me know what you think. I'm sure there are a few things I'll catch or remember to add some small detail, but this is as done as I can think of for the time being.

Edit: Revised with a few things I had forgotten that i luckily caught.


  1. They look good! I like the little icing footprints.

  2. The art is lovely! But I'm not crazy about the text. It isn't so much that it's black, but the placement is a bit haphazard in certain spots.

    1.) The second, third and last panel where it covers the baker's hat.

    2.) In the second panel it seems crammed between the chalk board and the right edge of the page.

    3.) The 4th panel where it covers the baker's rack.

    4.) The 5th panel where it covers the pies.

    I have a few suggestions, but they require the assitance of illustrator and/or photoshop. We could discuss it Thursday if you'd like.